Leo 开始用他稚嫩的笔写虚幻小说了。我把他的原版原样敲出来，包括他的错误拼写。
第一篇，其中有很好的关于心理的描写。
第二篇，有一点幽默，关于"rock star"的双关。
对于一个kindergarten的孩子，很不错了。
小说一
Leo 11/24/09
Once upon a time…
I was in the wild west, when I saw a aliean ship landed at the desert. I ran to take a look at it. Out came the alieans, they were happy. They said they had a gift for me. I was so happy. My heart was full of glee. I was so curious for what it was.
The end.
小说二
Leo 11/24/09
Once upon a time…
I was in outer space and I saw some space creatures and I saw a lot of robots when a weird creature crossed by I waved at it. It waved back at me. I asked for what it was and it said it was a rock star.
The end.
妈妈给爷爷的翻译：很久很久以前， 我在外太空，我看见一些太空生物。我看见很多机器人。有一个奇怪的生物经过，我向它招手，它也向我招手。我问它是什么，它说它是石头星。 结束。
爸爸笑，“Rock star是摇滚歌星！"
日记一
Leo 11/23/09
Me at the pard with my friend and my friend walked away and so I was alone.
日记二
I went to the park with my friend and my friend walked away and so I was alone.
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